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考研作文话题无非是“热点现象”和“人生哲理”两大类。其中,“热点现象”又包括对该现象的完全褒扬、对该现象的完全批判、对该现象的理性评价(既褒扬又批判)等几种情况。

据此,主旨段应包括:

1.若话题为完全褒扬或体现人生哲理时,需围绕该话题所具有的社会意义或价值展开论述,体现出推理性,可采用正反论证、举例论证、类比论证及因果论证等;

Below the picture lies a caption–mutual support, wisely demonstrating the role of family affection in our life journey. (主题句) Dwelling in our hearts, parents are two giants who give us life, bring us up and teach us what life is. Maybe they are less than perfect, or perhaps the family affection between us fails to flash a dazzling light. Yet it is a touch of softness and kindness that coats the happiest color for our days.(让步论证) As the old saying goes,

“ The sheep has the feeling of filial piety and the young crow has the sentiment to re-feed their parents. In the early days, we enjoyed what our parents bestowed; when they grow older. it is our responsibility to support them, making them constantly feel the presence of family affection and then enjoy their latter years. ( 类比论证)Furthermore, we should cherish, educate and care our children, letting them pass the thick cordiality on.(适用于2014年大作文)

译文:图片下方的“相携”二字,充满智慧地说明亲情在人生旅途中的作用。每个人心中都住着两位叫作父母的巨人,他们赋予了我们生命,将我们抚养成人,教会我们什么叫做生活。也许他们并不完美,也许我们之间的亲情并没有闪耀出耀眼的光芒,但就是这一抹一抹的温柔和亲切,为我们的日子涂抹着最幸福的颜色,古语云:羔羊有跪乳之恩、雏鸦有反哺之义。年少时,我们享受着父母给予我们的一切,而当父母年老时,我们就要肩负起赡养他们的责任,让他们时刻感受到亲情的存在,从而得以颐养天年。另外我们也要爱护、教育和照顾自己的子女,让他们将这一浓浓的情意传承下去。

分析:这是2014年考研试题《相携》,属于完全褒扬性话题。该篇范文利用句间关系使逻辑关系非常严谨,而且采用了多种论证方法,使表意更清楚,论证更明晰。

首句作为主题句,点明题旨。紧接着在第二句富含感情地描述了父母对自己的养育之恩,说明亲情建立的基础,然后在三四两句采用了让步论证的手法,说明即使父母有种种缺点,亲情仍是让我们最幸福的颜色。继而笔锋一转,在五六两句采用类比论证的方法,用羔羊和雏鸦类比我们年轻人,说明自然界的动物尚且知道回报亲恩,何况我们人类呢?最后指出我们应将亲情传递下去,紧扣了主旨,又升华了全段思想。

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